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Charlie Walls's avatar

This is awesome.

"fled, but it suddenly didn't feel like a game. He was too quick—too silent. I felt like a fawn being stalked." Fawn being stalked is perfect

Just Another Jim's avatar

That was so good! I loved the Anne Rice stories for the tension and even as a short trip this had lots of that. Well done!

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