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Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

What struck me most was “We all fed Leviathan / And Leviathan became.” You don’t simply say the monster grows; you say it becomes. That changes the responsibility of everyone watching. Each person may think their attention is too small to matter, but in the end Leviathan is also the sum of all those eyes upon him. Perhaps some monsters don’t need to be defeated. They need us to stop participating in their existence.

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I absolutely loved this. Leviathan works perfectly as the monster, but the idea underneath it is what really got me: every attempt to fight it, point at it, talk about it, or make it smaller only gives it more attention and therefore more power. “Each harpoon builds a stage” is such a killer way of putting that. And then the ending, “We all fed Leviathan / And Leviathan became,” turns the whole thing back on everyone who thought their little contribution couldn’t possibly matter. Also, the audio was badass. 😂 It genuinely felt like a heavy metal sea shanty you’d hear right before somebody makes the terrible decision to go looking for the monster.

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