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Daily I sat at my loom, Such wonders did I weave. My shuttle swift, my fingers sure, Each day and every eve. My father made his cloth so fine, My mother taught me too. My fingers found designs profound That even gods would view. The women came to watch me work, Their praise a careful thing. “You’re gifted, yes,” they always said, Although their tone did sting. “Be mindful,” some would murmur low. “Don’t claim yourself too great. The gods grow jealous,” others warned, “Your skill invites their hate.” Athena came in armor bright, With eyes both cold and shrewd. She praised my skill, then fell quite still And claimed the scene was lewd. “It’s not!” I cried—though none denied My truth, none would defend. She tore the tapestry in twain, Beyond all hope to mend. Athena preached of balance, grace— Of lessons learned through strife, And smiled the way a woman does Before she ruins your life. I fled, I cried, I begged the gods, But none stood by my side. I tied the rope about my neck— My final act of pride. Athena came with pity now, To mend what she had done. Eight legs did sprout, as I cried out— My weaving had begun. So now I spin in corners dark, My truth in silk, unseen. I’m free to weave my tapestries Which none will call obscene.




Filing under "Pride goeth before the fall"
Exceptionally well done. To hit every beat of the story in rhyme is no small feat.
I read this slowly, like it deserved silence around it. Thank you for writing something so honest.